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Hi Josh

Good blog so far.

Good to see the interviews from Tuesday up but please tag these with interviews with all the names of all four group members.  I can’t actually play these files on my home computer  - can you please check that the videos work okay?

I’d ask you to please add the task numbers to the blogs and tag everything done so far as “RESEARCH”, apart from your post on 25 October about creative ideas which should be called “PLANNING” – sorry, my mistake, I should have made this clear earlier.

I enjoyed your initial post on creative ideas. The idea of rapid cuts in an action scene could work very well, but I’d ask you to post some some videos or illustrative material to accompany your post, to explain your idea in more detail. A blog is a multimedia product and shouldn’t be just text, it should be illustrated and enhanced with gifs, graphcis, content sharing apps etc. It’s exactly the same with both of your macro analyses – they are both well written but would be greatly enhanced by the use of video links so I could see the sequence you are discussing. .

Your remake is very good also, the titles well positioned and I like the fonts you’ve used though I’d probably have gone with a different colour to make them stand out more. There’s one slight “bump” where things go out of sequence. The acting needs some work though!

Good work so far, please keep it up .

Cheers

Dan